first, zman noticed something ironically wonderful in how I wrote my big takeaway . . .
zman quoted me . . .
"it's all in the revision and editing . . . very few people do anything good not he first try"
Well said.
"it's all in the revision and editing . . . very few people do anything good not he first try"
Well said.
then zman reminisced with an excellent anecdote:
zman said...
Parts of this "sentence" remind me of the time I checked into the Fairfield Inn in Raleigh NC, a low-slung place near the airport. I went to my room on the third floor, set my stuff down, started to unpack, and realized that there was a swarm of ants on and around the desk. I brought all my stuff downstairs and told the guy at the desk. He said "Yeah we have ants on the third floor." I asked him why he put me on the third floor given the formic situation and he replied "Well there's no view on the second floor." I told him I would trade the view and the ants for no view and no ants, so he moved me to the second floor. There were no ants in my new room but when I flushed the toilet the bowl didn't fill up and the sink didn't have any water. I called downstairs and the guy at the desk said "Yeah there's no water on the second floor right now." I asked if he had any rooms with water and without ants and he moved me to the first floor. You would think he would've run through all this beforehand.
then I chimed in . . . and Zman graciously gave me permission to do something very weird:
zman said...
Parts of this "sentence" remind me of the time I checked into the Fairfield Inn in Raleigh NC, a low-slung place near the airport. I went to my room on the third floor, set my stuff down, started to unpack, and realized that there was a swarm of ants on and around the desk. I brought all my stuff downstairs and told the guy at the desk. He said "Yeah we have ants on the third floor." I asked him why he put me on the third floor given the formic situation and he replied "Well there's no view on the second floor." I told him I would trade the view and the ants for no view and no ants, so he moved me to the second floor. There were no ants in my new room but when I flushed the toilet the bowl didn't fill up and the sink didn't have any water. I called downstairs and the guy at the desk said "Yeah there's no water on the second floor right now." I asked if he had any rooms with water and without ants and he moved me to the first floor. You would think he would've run through all this beforehand.
then I chimed in . . . and Zman graciously gave me permission to do something very weird:
Dave said...
holy shit. i was rushing my post because I had to go to acupuncture . . . i think I may make your comments into tomorrow's post-- they deserve to get front-page treatment that's an exceptional anecdote--i might-- with your permission-- set it to music.
zman said...
You have my permission to make a song out of my experience at the Fairfield Inn. Not only is it near the airport, it's between a Cracker Barrel and a Hooters.
rob said...
i will turn the dial down on my customary snark to say that this is a very cool thing that happened in daveworld and i appreciated hearing about it.
/unsnark
Dave said...
that helps with the setting . . . and thanks for turning down the snark, rob!
his snark goes to 11
i will turn the dial down on my customary snark to say that this is a very cool thing that happened in daveworld and i appreciated hearing about it.
/unsnark
Dave said...
that helps with the setting . . . and thanks for turning down the snark, rob!
his snark goes to 11
thanks guys . . . and understand that these comments have been duly appreciated!
Thanks Dave. This is why I comment here, the off chance that my comment will lead to fame and fortune by being repurposed into a sentence of Dave. Nice job on the mini today too.
ReplyDeleteand the offer chance that dave writes a song based on your experience that becomes a huge hit and he shares royalties with you and then you become fonzworth bentley to dave's p diddy.
ReplyDeleteHi!
ReplyDeletefonzworth bentley? i'm going to have to look that one up.
ReplyDeletehey whit!